It’s a really interesting comic filled with colour. But the problem was that I couldn’t really see what the point of it was. It’s about girl that’s straight and gets kissed by a lesbian, right? So what’s the point you’re trying to make? I think it’s a really cool comic but I also just think you guys should’ve had another strip to make the point clearer. For example, where the “Jess” character admits to her friends that she liked the kiss or that she totally despised it and was forced into it or something. Just something that would make your point clear and obvious. But for the rest of it, I salute you – it was pretty cool. Well done for the work you've done so far!
It’s a lovely comic and is something which students can relate to. However i do not see the point of the story being portrayed. There is no climax to the story and no second equilibrium. It is a bit too plain. If the disruption is the kiss then where is the resolution and what is it? You could have looked for a more appropriate ending that makes clear what Jess thought about the kiss or whether or not she decided to become lesbian. It is also not clear what the genre is. Who is the hero or the villain? You could have made it better by incorporating Proppian characters to make the role of each character clear in the comic. The comic is too short to express all of your ideas and therefore leaves the reader with too many questions unanswered.
Your comic was very interesting and quit true but I couldnt understand the story line I had to conclude for myself what the end of the story should be. It was not clear enough who was the villain and the princess as no one was saved or mistreated by the villain, and how was the hero? The comic is of a serious and a very sensitive issue. I am not sure whether "Jess" is excited with the kiss or she believes that she has been forced into kissing girls. From the beginning of the comic it was not clear enough that "Jess" is not Bisexual or not thus in the end of the comic I was confused.
Nice use of the black colour as it depicts confusion, of the first year student.
This comic is funny because this stuff does happen at Rhodes, all the time, but I think that it was a bit too short and simple. Maybe if the comic had more of a plot behind it, or even the aftermath, to elastrate how she felt after the kiss and if she turned lesbian herself. The story ends abit inconclusive as we are left with no fixed ending. It’s a great topic and genre to cover, but as a group could have maybe elaborated a bit more on the actual story idea. But hey, maybe we weren’t meant to know the conclusion, make us wonder, and think, I like your strategy. Regards, Spineless
It's a pretty interesting and novel idea - but unfortunately not well portrayed. The comic has definite potential and I really liked the way that the characters displayed their emotions, unfortunately it just doesn't really go anywhere. Who was the hero, where was the villian? It seems Todorov got shoved a side for sexual experimentation. They kiss, but what then? As an audience we are left wondering what the implications of the kiss are, how she reacts to the kiss etc. I really did like the idea though, but it definitely could have been fleshed out a bit. Otherwise, a pretty cool idea!
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It’s a really interesting comic filled with colour. But the problem was that I couldn’t really see what the point of it was. It’s about girl that’s straight and gets kissed by a lesbian, right? So what’s the point you’re trying to make? I think it’s a really cool comic but I also just think you guys should’ve had another strip to make the point clearer. For example, where the “Jess” character admits to her friends that she liked the kiss or that she totally despised it and was forced into it or something. Just something that would make your point clear and obvious. But for the rest of it, I salute you – it was pretty cool. Well done for the work you've done so far!
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Oh, agreed. It needs a little spit 'n' polish. I'll get in touch with the lady in charge shortly.
Watch this space,
Cock
It’s a lovely comic and is something which students can relate to. However i do not see the point of the story being portrayed. There is no climax to the story and no second equilibrium. It is a bit too plain. If the disruption is the kiss then where is the resolution and what is it? You could have looked for a more appropriate ending that makes clear what Jess thought about the kiss or whether or not she decided to become lesbian. It is also not clear what the genre is. Who is the hero or the villain? You could have made it better by incorporating Proppian characters to make the role of each character clear in the comic. The comic is too short to express all of your ideas and therefore leaves the reader with too many questions unanswered.
Your comic was very interesting and quit true but I couldnt understand the story line I had to conclude for myself what the end of the story should be. It was not clear enough who was the villain and the princess as no one was saved or mistreated by the villain, and how was the hero? The comic is of a serious and a very sensitive issue. I am not sure whether "Jess" is excited with the kiss or she believes that she has been forced into kissing girls. From the beginning of the comic it was not clear enough that "Jess" is not Bisexual or not thus in the end of the comic I was confused.
Nice use of the black colour as it depicts confusion, of the first year student.
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Molly
This comic is funny because this stuff does happen at Rhodes, all the time, but I think that it was a bit too short and simple. Maybe if the comic had more of a plot behind it, or even the aftermath, to elastrate how she felt after the kiss and if she turned lesbian herself. The story ends abit inconclusive as we are left with no fixed ending. It’s a great topic and genre to cover, but as a group could have maybe elaborated a bit more on the actual story idea. But hey, maybe we weren’t meant to know the conclusion, make us wonder, and think, I like your strategy.
Regards,
Spineless
It's a pretty interesting and novel idea - but unfortunately not well portrayed. The comic has definite potential and I really liked the way that the characters displayed their emotions, unfortunately it just doesn't really go anywhere. Who was the hero, where was the villian? It seems Todorov got shoved a side for sexual experimentation. They kiss, but what then? As an audience we are left wondering what the implications of the kiss are, how she reacts to the kiss etc. I really did like the idea though, but it definitely could have been fleshed out a bit. Otherwise, a pretty cool idea!
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